http://mute-clay.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mute-clay.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mute_clay 2005-03-02 06:44 am (UTC)

Breath can be telling.

His stops - then it returns in a whoosh and she might be able to hear the bump as he sits down. Hard.

Then there's an almost sob, a low hitched breath.

She is back.

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